Words in Headlines Mean More

Headlines serve an obvious purpose of attracting attention, being the signpost to further reading.  But in the context of a readership heavily disinclined to study the angles and dig deeper — indeed, to even read the entire article itself — a heavy responsibility now falls on the headline to assert the article’s core truth claims and frame the content accurately.  In essence, the entirety of journalistic integrity now rests upon the semantics of signposts.
 
Increased attunement to the shaping of headlines with respect to the article’s content and truth claims put the following Reuters article,  Organic Food is No Healthier, Study Finds, into my disapproving purview.
This article (also posted on MSN) describes a study done on the nutritional content based on vitamin and mineral availability in conventional versus organically grown produce.
 
The headline’s truth statement skews both the issue of what’s “healthy” about food and puts the content in a certain expectational framework not found in the content.
 
An excerpt (emphasis mine):

“A small number of differences in nutrient content were found to exist between organically and conventionally produced foodstuffs, but these are unlikely to be of any public health relevance,” said Alan Dangour, one of the report’s authors. “Our review indicates that there is currently no evidence to support the selection of organically over conventionally produced foods on the basis of nutritional superiority.”

 
Any journalist in the health arena knows full well, or should, that the consumer decision to gravitate towards “more healthy” produce has very little to do with alleged tallies of vitamins and minerals, and everything to do with the fear of contamination with pesticides, antimicrobials, and other lovely value-added proposals that may or may not decrease the overall well-being of oneself and one’s family.  The true question of organic purchasing is not, “is this food more nutritious than the cheaper food”, but rather, “is all the extra gook they grew and shipped this produce with going to outweigh the goodness of this vegetable I’m going to the trouble to buy, prepare, and eat?”
 
 
Whenever an article’s headline makes such a slight but meaningful shift away from its contents’ truth claims, I have to think at least one of the following things about the writer of the article:
  • He doesn’t consider the headline to be part of the truth statements made in the article — in other words, all semantics are fair play, words are fully interchangeable, etc.
  • She doesn’t actually understand the semantics of her own article.
  • He doesn’t particularly care about the truth claims of his article.
…none of which serve to recommend the writer in question too well.
 
The point of all this polemic: WORDS MEAN THINGS — even the words meant to draw attention to other words.
 
What’s at stake here?  Why care?
 
Most people only read the headlines (consider the popularity of Twitter).  And those who read further will have the information they were seeded with in the headline framed by that initial statement.  And in the morning at the watercooler, that’s the information, the core truth statement, that will get passed around.
 
The headline could have read, “Organic food no more nutritious…” and would have reflected much more accurately the study’s results.  Sure, it’s not quite as snappy, but it’s more honest journalism.
 
Headlines are arguments too — arguably the most potent and far-reaching ones you will write.  Consider them carefully… just as I’ve considered the headline to this blog post.

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  • http://www.chuckmoulton.org/ Chuck Moulton

    Your implicit assumption is that journalists write their own headlines. That isn’t consistent with my understanding of industry practice — at least among newspapers, magazines, etc. The copy editor (or sub-editor) writes the headlines.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copy_editing

    I’ve spoken with many reporter friends who have been horrified at the headlines attached to their articles… but there isn’t much they can do about it. The copy editor is rewarded for sensationalism, not accuracy.

    To some extent it makes sense to have someone specialize in the clever, attention grabbing play on words commonly associated with headline writing. You’ve clearly articulated the drawbacks in that approach though.

    In my opinion the best compromise would be to have journalists approve headlines written by copy editors before the article goes to publication. However, that might not be realistic in the fast paced news business — especially if reporters look forward to getting off the clock and socializing or going to sleep after submitting an article under a tight deadline.

  • http://annmariegamble.wordpress.com/ Ann Marie

    A complaint reporters have had for years is that they don’t write the headlines of their stories, and there are many examples inappropriate headlines written by–they suspect–copyeditors who were looking for flair or who didn’t make it to the end of the article. (Side point–I think this is one reason newspapers are in trouble. If they can’t represent their own story accurately, that’s not confidence inspiring about what they say the story is.)

    Personally, though, I think this sort of thing is more common with stories about science, where there is a trope that “It’s all just a theory” (in the lay definition of “theory”) and especially food science, where “This claim will be contradicted by the next study.” Scientists speak in ever-narrower terms to try to avoid this kind of reporting, but their careful language doesn’t help generalist reporters put the study in context.

  • http://nthmost.com nthmost

    Agreed, and very good observations, both Ann Marie and Chuck have made. I was definitely thinking of the article’s headline as being written by the writer.

    The end effect is the problem, so I retract my polemic against the theoretical writer-copyeditor who probably wasn’t the culprit in this case.

    More thoughts on this soon.

  • http://nthmost.com nthmost

    Ann Marie: “I think this is one reason newspapers are in trouble. If they can’t represent their own story accurately, that’s not confidence inspiring about what they say the story is.”

    This is much more than a side-note; it’s a wake-up call.

    If headlines are the new content (and certainly the Associated Press, with their ire at Google, seems to demonstrate belief as such), then journals are going to need to be a lot more careful when they generate and publish them.

    We run into issues of Authority and Relevance at this point — what is the Truth and who can be considered a canonical Source when information becomes obsolete almost the moment it’s published?

    It’s an open question…

  • http://www.chuckmoulton.org/ Chuck Moulton

    (Sorry if this is a repeat. I’m re-posting my second comment because I don’t see it as “comment awaiting moderation” when I view this page like I did for my first comment the past day. That makes me assume it got gobbled up by the Internets. If possible, please reject this comment if the other one actually exists or edit out this header if it doesn’t exist.)

    One possibility is to involve the readers more. Mind you, the approach I’m going to suggest would only work for online content and falls flat for print media.

    Facebook has a button below every wall post for “Like”. Slashdot allows users to rate comments up and down. Many dating websites have buttons saying “flag content as inappropriate” on each profile.

    I believe these same principles can be applied to headlines. If each headline had a button next to it allowing users to rate the relevance and/or accuracy, the amalgamation of feedback could point human moderators to problems in an efficient fashion. There could even be a “suggest a better headline” button that would generate a popup text box.

    There are two basic principles at play here:
    1) Online content providers shouldn’t consider the initial publishing to be the final act. Corrections and updates should become part of the culture when content will be archived.
    2) Updates are cheapest and most thorough when the audience is engaged to be a part of the process, creating a massively distributed network of free proofreaders and knowledge contributors.

    Part of me wonders what individual newspapers and books would look like a week later if they were unleashed on Wikipedia with appropriate moderation and an adequate engaged fan base. I’m confident the net result would be an improvement in the rate of typos and level of accuracy.

  • http://nthmost.com nthmost

    I’m really hoping “publishing” becomes just, “oh fuck it, we’re basically doing a wiki at this point, so let’s just make this a wiki.”

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